(18 April 1959 / Portland, Oregon)

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What Are You Thinking What Do You See

What is it that amazes you?
Is it the magic that is in the air?
Who is it that you're thinking of?
Is it the one for who you care?

I create my own views of life,
Mystical and full of love.
I imagine what I want to see,
And it all appears from above.

But tell me what are you thinking of,
Do you see your true desires?
Do they appear as do mine?
Dancing on the evening fires.

I wonder as I look at you
Do you see what I do see?
Are you dancing with me tonight?
Feeling love and feeling free.

REB (MAY 2012) I was just thinking, that's ok isn't it?

Submitted: Tuesday, May 15, 2012
Edited: Monday, May 21, 2012

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  • Jayne Davies (5/27/2013 2:27:00 AM)

    Lovely poem! Well done x

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  • [- W@king Up -] (5/27/2013 12:46:00 AM)

    Of course thinking is okay :) because it allowed you to compose this wonderful poem! Great work :)

    -W

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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (5/28/2012 12:45:00 AM)

    Helpless loneliness is so loud. Nice write.

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  • Kasia Fedyk (5/27/2012 3:30:00 AM)

    Yes, mystical and full of love, I do the same, Thank you for such a beautiful poem, a song to every heart.

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  • Heather Wilson (5/15/2012 12:29:00 PM)

    Yes, that was a beautiful thought in that poem, and a pleasure to read.

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