Once he left me,
once he ofended me,
once he broke my heart,
and once I cried.
He tought me life's biggest lessons,
how to love and be loved,
how to stop regreting things I shouldn't,
and how to learn from my mistakes.
But I never knew,
never learned,
how to appreciate what he's done,
how to feel what he felt with me..
Untill that day...
A little kid came to my door,
he asked me to be his love,
I tried hard to say yes,
because in those eyes i saw nothing more than pain,
and then I realized what my first love felt,
once when I started acting childish.
I tried not to hurt the little boy,
but I couldn't do anything else,
my mind wouldn't think of a solution,
and that day came, when I said no.
Now my little boy is hurt,
he is going through everything I went through,
and now I am going through everything that person I once loved did.
What goes around comes back around,
in diferent way,
in a different time,
but it still does the same to the heart.
Love reveals itself in so many ways, Ana...love...the joy and grief both, we get out of it are there in the air...like virus...never know wtat would catch whom...nice poem...thanks...10
so true what Goes Around Comes Back Around......nice theme and nicely penned........ good work
What goes around comes back around, in diferent way, in a different time, but it still does the same to the heart. well done..its really a good and very much impressive poem..liked it..written well and professioanlly....10++++++++++
What goes around comes back around, in diferent way, in a different time, but it still does the same to the heart oHHH I know how it hurts when it comes around! ! ! .... this is a great one indeed..filled with emtions..10++ with love shan.
Very profoundly written ana, and to learn from life, no matter how difficult it was/is, to take something good with you, to find through the burning aching pain, to find a positve feeling in your heart, is one of life's secrets.... There are no guraentee's with life/ love, but a learning lesson is something we all learn, to some it is bliss, to others it is painfull, but the bottom line is the same lesson teaches us yet another mystery of life..... Very very tenderly written, and penned from within the walls of your heart..........
a natural flow in this poem....very true what goes around comes back...just like every action has a reaction....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is as transparent as the other side of the heart, yet the beats are in the way..what makes it start and never flow away in such a simple tear you shed for both...iip