What Is Death Means To Me Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

What Is Death Means To Me

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What is it like when I’ve died?
Just died and nothing would come
No more prides
No more crimes
No more plights
No more times
No more families
No more memories
No more availability
No more worries
No more eats
No more drinks
No more greeds
No more thinks
No more wake
No more sleeps
No more fakes
No more creeps
Just blacked out
And out
Out to nowhere
But beware
It’s not the end yet
You bet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tami Gee 13 March 2008

Wonderful death poem.

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Gregory Collins 21 July 2008

time is long and loud until the last beat of your heart

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Mamta Agarwal 22 July 2008

death is not the end, you bet- well written

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Marcella D 10 July 2009

sounds like a good poem and you have a good point there about death

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Marcellus Watts 17 June 2009

I love this one, a dark creepy, quite, unknown atmosphere in the poem thats what i love about it.: -)

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Naidz Ladia 29 December 2008

hahahahhaha...whatta poem, , , strong infrmation that u r still living and everybody should be careful coz ull be going up and ready to be on top....THATS WHAT I LIKE FROM YOU HON.... DONT QUIT, , , aa i know ull not.... ALWAYS SOAR HIGH, , as high as the sky...i like ths nformation WHCH s written in lines....i like ths, , I REALLY LIKE THE WAY U SHOW UR BRAVERY TOWARDS COMPETETORS..... the last line.....'bet it', , , , , WHATTA WORD....my gosh...as if i dont want to stop typing wrds for ths poem...oh my gosh...

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Linda Weischedel 21 August 2008

Wildly intense poem!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 August 2008

Yet we dread the death. good

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