What Love Really Is... Poem by brittany smith

What Love Really Is...

Rating: 4.9


What Love Really Is....

love is a powerful thing
love can be pain

love is so amazing
love can bring pain

so many words can express your love
so many things says it all

love is so sweet...
I'm thinking about you,
now i must give you a call.


By: Brittany Smith
9/16/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brittany Smith 16 September 2008

i think your poem is great..its very touching and it says alot in so many little words...this may be your first poem, but if you keep going at this rate...you would get better!

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C T Heart 01 October 2008

Nice piece to share for a start, just keep on writing and reading to be able to learn how other poets penned their crafts so well. Always put your emotions to stir your readers right into the core of your works.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 October 2008

LOVE - is a very powerful emotion that can move mountains like faith

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 October 2008

True said.....simple and touchy......10+

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John Mogodi 02 October 2008

What is love? good poem, at 16 you are slowly starting to understand love... As you get older you will be blow away by the shift from how love makes you feel when someone you love shows you affection and care to how love make you feel when you give it and see the joy it manifests in your loved one's life. Great work.

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Egi David Perdana 01 October 2008

is really good to me like a diamond of golden love please read it

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Sylvia Chidi 01 October 2008

Nice love poem. Keep up with the writing!

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Stacey Watts 01 October 2008

This is another beautiful work. I think it is wonderful.

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