What Would It Be Like Without? ... Poem by Miranda Van Yperen

What Would It Be Like Without? ...

Rating: 5.0


What would it be like…
Without the loss of a loved one?
Without the hunger for knowledge?
Without the sound carefree birds?
Without the feel of wind in my hair?
Without the smell of the flowers?
Without the touch of the grass?
Without the sight of the pain?
Without the taste of the sweet sugar?
Without the need to love some one?
Without the hate to work?
Without the love to smile?
If that were it,
It wouldn’t be something,
Worth living in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 29 July 2009

Without the sight of the pain? Without the taste of the sweet sugar? Without the need to love some one? Without the hate to work? Without the love to smile? what a sweet poem with above meaningful verses..well doen and really a good job you added here..you have much thoughts in your brain..that i love them when you express in sweet poetry form..hope you do more and moe poems and never stop...its a good and heartfeeling poem..dear..respect you..10/10

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