It was a moonless night,
When the boy went for a walk,
there was no light,
when the boy heard someone talk...
he went into the woods to see who was there,
it sounded like a woman was dying from despair,
when he saw an ugly old woman with long gray hair,
the boy almost fainted from scare!
All the boy wanted was to scream,
because the woman was a witch, or so it would seem,
she had no teeth she was ugly and really fat,
she had a black dress and a pointy hat,
and she even had a little black cat!
The woman grabbed him by his hand,
the boy was so scared he couldn't even stand,
she tried potions and magic on the poor boy,
she treated him no better than a broken toy,
she turned him into a monster, and she let him go,
he left as soon as she said so,
a week was already gone,
when he left it was still dawn,
he got lost in the woods,
he couldn't find his way,
and then he understood,
that he wouldn't live to see the day!
so he lied on the floor,
when he dreamed of opening a door,
he saw a great light,
But he woke up, and it was a full moon night,
there was no sun and the bats started to fight!
the boy could not forget that ugly face,
but now he will be in a happier place! !
he looked at the moon, and he closed his eyes,
and then he took one last breath,
this is no surprise,
this is just death!
wow! fantastic you told me i don't have to comment but i really wanted to comment cuz i liked every thing in this poem..it's good but not better than your poem(the moon and the sun) which i think it is the best poem you wrote! ! i give it a ten and another ten to you! ! ! !
awesome poem kuji! ! the rhyme...the story...the whole poem! ! ! It remebered me with a mail, i read it today..10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The poem is FANTASTIC...your imagination and your mind are both great dear sophia...but i have only a very small suggestion...try to make the last two lines rhyme together but dont change the end which is death...try to make them rhyme....but the poem is really wonderfull :)