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Rating: 5.0


it happens everyday, i die
and i relive, everyday
of black magic forests, clutter my being
everyday,
spring flowers winter icicicles all over me
everyday,
i proliferate thoughts in barren heart soil
blooming bytes in minds mines
everyday,
i die a tormented death
i take rebirth a laughing ME.....! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 16 April 2008

very cool, this is a very different poem. I see alot of contrast (the tormented death, and laughing birth) I love the whole reincarnation idea. Sometimes I feel like a spring flower and a winter icicle. A good read. Check out my stuff if you get a chance

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 April 2008

amazing trinity................cool write

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Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

a deep metaphor graced with lively imagery....dealing with the self and innerself...well expressed.

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Sadiqullah Khan 24 April 2008

the i and me...fine thought

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Poras Sharma 25 April 2008

Wonderful penning of thoughts, I enjoyed it.

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Subroto Chatterjee 22 August 2009

Thank God you are yourself....no out-of-body experience yet....? Cheers. Subroto

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

I Me Myself--- strange I think like you sometimes powerful write A+ and 10+regards anju

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 October 2008

Superb. Very well portrayed. Thank you.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 02 June 2008

Mutual feelings...women! ! ! same agony... wish us all happiness, Cate

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Malini Kadir 26 April 2008

Why you and me have loads in common....nice to have discovered you today!

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