When The Angels Came For Me Poem by elysabeth faslund

When The Angels Came For Me

Rating: 5.0


I said, 'Wait a minute!
I have to get...'
'Not anything you'll need.'
I said, 'You wanna bet? '

Got my pool stick
From the corner.
'Dad owes me a game!
He's such a goner!

Eight ball in the side
And beer's on the house! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 26 February 2008

I am taking my football boots with me should be a good few matches, loved it 10 Chris

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Christian MERLE 06 March 2008

That's very nice...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

i'm still waiting for my dreamed angel to come!

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Esther Leclerc 01 March 2008

Elysabeth... Love this much! This strikes a chord, one that resonates with this reader; tho' with my Dad it'll be beer and football on the tube! : ] Esther

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 March 2008

yet when endeared by the glaze, and wait a minute! , beautiful verse, i likje it,10+, thanks for sharing

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Coll B. Lue 26 February 2008

A nice jaunty rhythmic poem, Elysabeth!

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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