When You Left Me Behind Poem by chenoa kai kanis

When You Left Me Behind

Rating: 5.0


Betrayal, no word cuts deeper than this
Lies, spueing forth from lips i still long to kiss
Trust, lost to me among your shadows and mist.
Longing, as fathomless as the depths of the sea
Hope, shattered left left to die so needlessly
lust, a living thing, a fire so hot it is consuming me, your heart a lock that has no key
Loneliness, so thick it blocks the very air i breath, jealousy awoken like a bird of pray, talons shining against the sky
Pain, all incompassing the tears ive yet to cry. And love, sweet love lies broken and abandoned as you turn from me
and pass us by.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with painful passion. Excellently expressed!

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Roseann Shawiak 27 December 2013

A very intense poem, I can feel your pain in my heart. Great expression of emotional sadness - being betrayed by someone you loved is very difficult. My heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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