Whence Came We? Poem by Fay Slimm

Whence Came We?

Rating: 4.5


Why wait until old or frail
Before asking whence we came?
Were we, before we appeared here
On earth some bright star? Endearing
To many is that we, aware
Of earth's real need, chose this caring
Role. Heart beating love towards all
Will bring peace, but does not recall
The true state we dwelt in back then.
At times, the mind seems to sense when
There was no earthy form folding
Wraps around our radiant soul.
Was our whole spirit revolving
Around lovelight and life, solving
This problem of place, as above
Us, pervading all, was Pure Love
Weaving true peace? Asked then to prove
We could become earth-bound, and move
When invited, to bring again
Whispers from God, do we remain?
When we know heaven is not far
And never forget who we are.
Can we be true? If so we know
There is so much more work to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 14 July 2009

It matters not from where we came from, for its there we will return with the attributes we were born with, and the lessons that we learn we may wonder our existence and ponder on our demise its all recorded in our DNA , that blueprint tells no lies

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Carol Gall 11 July 2009

a really good poem fay asks many pertinent questions

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A meaningful poem floating upon the waves of the unknown ocean of eternity.10+

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Herbert Nehrlich2 11 July 2009

Wow is right but a bit too much earth and not enough heaven.... great job as usual Fay. Hxx

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! Fabulous written poem Great rhymes and diction used 10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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