Edgar Rendon Eslit

(August 21,1971 / Iligan City)

Whisper (Valentine special 2)


Felt the breeze that’s glazing around the Eiffel
The floral scents in lilac that mystified your smell
While we strolled around the scenic site in Paris
Have you not forgotten the words we used to immortalize?
The words not of a promise but of dedication
Oh, so lovely and pure beyond imagination
And while we savor its sweetness
That darling smile of yours
made me realize that
nothing is important to me now
than to love you forever
Yes, that whisper in the garden
made me smile again
When you replied
I love you
‘till the end

Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2008
Edited: Monday, January 28, 2008

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Atina (1/24/2008 9:28:00 PM)

    Lovely poetry! This poem has such a lyrical feel especially the last three lines. (Report) Reply

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