Whispered Appeal. Poem by Fay Slimm

Whispered Appeal.

Rating: 5.0


Let him know, oh God.
Make him know that you care.
Every moment he's gone
You'll need to be there.

Bring him safely home.
Hear my prayer of appeal.
Be beside him please God.
His danger's for real.

...........Amen..............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Kempson 08 November 2009

We all pray for that 10 Daniel

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Stephen Stirk 20 November 2009

Such a sad and poignant piece, which is so appropriate for the time of year. You have our prayers. Best Steve 10

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Georgia Girl 09 November 2009

aww Fay I feel your distress in this beautiful prayer for the one that you love and I will pray for you both also...10

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David Harris 08 November 2009

Fay, you have my prayers too. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Carol Gall 08 November 2009

i pray for him to return fay

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

And we pray also, Amen! 10.......

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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