Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Bit o' Fun!


(For the girls) - Scene - Bedroom.
Television On.

Who wants hot-rocking
Kits-off, full frontal
Chipperdancing ravers
When I got you babe?
Just looking!

Do I want knicker-waving
Lead-pumping prancers,
Toothy-grinning shimmyers,
Cheeky-faced paraders
When I got you babe?
Who's looking!

Must I have sexy singing
Leg-flinging swingers,
Botty-bumping antics
From wide-eyed romantics
When I got you babe?
Not looking!

To me my handsome honey-bun
You're all of them rolled into one.
Come on let's have our bit o' fun.

Television Off.

Submitted: Friday, January 09, 2009
Edited: Friday, January 09, 2009

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  • Rookie Michele Hegarty (2/6/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    Love the phrase 'Toothy-grinning shimmyers' - I saw 'The Chipendales' years ago, but give me a real loving man any time (in fact anytime soon would be good!)
    Brilliantly expressed by a real woman! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (1/26/2009 4:52:00 PM)

    It isn't often that television inspires a rollicking and humorous poem like this, Fay, one that's a rip-roaring treat for the reader! This delightful poem was a tour-de-force of your wonderful talent as well as a darn good poem. I'm just wondering if this goes on every night? ? ? ! ! ! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ngaio beck (1/18/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    Should I tell you I don't get it? I mean I got it. No I mean I had it.No I mean I got some.No wait I didn't get any, Oh Hell you know what I mean.Great Story (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 183 Points Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2009 5:29:00 AM)

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    What should I name it 'modern poetry'? This 's truly unique!
    A play mate has been the source of greatest entertainment & joy since this creation came in existance which have never ever faded.
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  • Rookie - 7 Points Deva De Silva (1/16/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    Amazingly clever, sharp, and whitty! Your creativity is simply heady... Happy I found you in a sea of nothingness. Me, your sworn fan from now on-

    Thanks.

    Deva (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scott Austin (1/16/2009 4:26:00 AM)

    Is that a roll in the hay and who needs a TV anyways fun…lol This is a wonderful piece of work with sweet emotions.

    Scott (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (1/15/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    'Come on, let's have our bit of fun.' Yes, Fay, OUR bit of fun; not A bit of fun - for there's nothing like what is truly yours, what you make for yourself, for YOUR fun is like no other since, as tou say, 'I got you babe' and who's looking

    This is moving and sweet, the first poem I read this morning and it will be with me all day.10 indeed.
    Mark (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (1/9/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    Laughing bags here Fay...Just at a picture of the 'Grand Finale' while the band played on...Great one Fay.
    Sid xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tony Jolley (1/9/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    Lovely! Would love to have a smart comment to make (probably wouldn't be me tho' then!) , suffice it to say that even two or three lines in to this comment I am still wearing the smile that you set going! ! ! Yep: we may be a bit older than today's youngsters, but we still know how to have fun! ! ! Still smiling! ! ! ! Love and best, Tony. (Report) Reply

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