Fay Slimm (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

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A Bit o' Fun!

(For the girls) - Scene - Bedroom.
Television On.

Who wants hot-rocking
Kits-off, full frontal
Chipperdancing ravers
When I got you babe?
Just looking!

Do I want knicker-waving
Lead-pumping prancers,
Toothy-grinning shimmyers,
Cheeky-faced paraders
When I got you babe?
Who's looking!

Must I have sexy singing
Leg-flinging swingers,
Botty-bumping antics
From wide-eyed romantics
When I got you babe?
Not looking!

To me my handsome honey-bun
You're all of them rolled into one.
Come on let's have our bit o' fun.

Television Off.

Fay Slimm
Submitted: Friday, January 09, 2009
Edited: Friday, January 09, 2009


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  • Laurie Hill (2/6/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    Saucy, mad and funny.10

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  • Michele Hegarty (2/6/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    Love the phrase 'Toothy-grinning shimmyers' - I saw 'The Chipendales' years ago, but give me a real loving man any time (in fact anytime soon would be good!)
    Brilliantly expressed by a real woman!

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  • Carl Harris (1/26/2009 4:52:00 PM)

    It isn't often that television inspires a rollicking and humorous poem like this, Fay, one that's a rip-roaring treat for the reader! This delightful poem was a tour-de-force of your wonderful talent as well as a darn good poem. I'm just wondering if this goes on every night? ? ? ! ! ! Carl.

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  • James Roberts (1/21/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    They were the days my friend may they never end

    a real fun poem
    jim

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (1/19/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    this is so enjoyable read......
    i just loved it

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  • ngaio beck (1/18/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    Should I tell you I don't get it? I mean I got it. No I mean I had it.No I mean I got some.No wait I didn't get any, Oh Hell you know what I mean.Great Story

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (1/18/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    instructive/educative as well as well done too..

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  • palas kumar ray (1/18/2009 5:29:00 AM)

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    What should I name it 'modern poetry'? This 's truly unique!
    A play mate has been the source of greatest entertainment & joy since this creation came in existance which have never ever faded.
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  • Bob Blackwell (1/17/2009 6:31:00 AM)

    TV does interfere, when it comes to evening games of.......love. 10 Bob

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  • Kevin Wells (1/16/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    This is great.... with just the right amount of sauce to make it spicy!

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