Your teeth have a painful shine,
Your smile is sad
In the absence of words.
You become aware of deeper parts of yourself
You become aware of the much greater wound in your soul...
Where only whites descend for love,
Making us realize that,
Only through love and pain, together,
We can become eternal and
We are aware of asceticism.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
you are so sweet, , and this poem is the coolest ur really talented....
Only through love and pain, together, -> sharing sweet&bitter nice. a lovely poem 10 for the sharing
'Your eyes become transparent / To the wound of the soul, / Where only white descend for love...' it is touching.
‘We are able to become eternal and /We are able of asceticism. ~ Indeed asceticism ~ refraining from worldly pleasures ‘Platonic Love’…into different plane…escalation…rhapsodic… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Better keep myself silent for utterance. Blow your whiteness silently. Apoet.
Making us realize that, Only through love and pain, together, We are able to become eternal and We are able of asceticism........ya it is eternal feeling and we all long for it..it is white that is pure and real....10 read mine....from theday one...teacher's woe
Nice poem with perfect ending and apt title. Few lines are composed brilliantly. Good one.
Well I am thinking about taking out a tooth... Ouch...your poem was poetic and written well
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Together is the keyword