Heather Burns


Wilderness Of Life - Poem by Heather Burns

Traveling
through
the
wilderness
of life

Many
thorns
along
the
journey

Leaves
cover
the
pathway

Leaving
behind
a veil
of tears

Tangled
after-
thoughts
of you

Causing
me to
lose
my way.


Comments about Wilderness Of Life by Heather Burns

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (7/22/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    A fantastic poem. To lose our way can be devastating,
    But to find ourselves again can be truly magical. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (7/22/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    This is really great, from it's very fitting title, to the poem that follows.
    Wonderful and very true, for many others, including you....who have
    felt the pain of losing someone. Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/20/2013 5:23:00 PM)

    Tangled
    after-
    thoughts
    of you

    Causing
    me to
    lose
    my way.
    Touched me! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/20/2013 2:40:00 PM)

    Like it. Sounds gloomy, I mean groovy. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,010 Points Valerie Dohren (7/20/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    Life has many thorns and leafy paths, but we all find our way in the end. Lovely poem Heather. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,387 Points Valsa George (7/19/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    Life's journey is often rugged, sometimes strewn with thorns, but we have to be careful not to lose the way! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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