Will There Ever Be An Escape For Me Poem by alicia page

Will There Ever Be An Escape For Me

Rating: 4.5


Will there ever be an escape from this hell
Will there ever be an escape from this emptiness of a shell inside of me
Will there ever be somebody to come and rescue me from this misery
Will there ever be someone to see that I'm suffering
Will there ever be someone to rescue me from what seems like a heartbreaking reality
Will there every be someone to hear my plea
Will there ever be someone to see that I am breaking
Will there every be someone to see that this world is just a fantasy

So tell me this will someone ever open their eyes and realize that there is never a way to break all these terrible ties as well a this suffering inside of me

Wednesday, February 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 25 February 2016

It is only temporary. That's all I can really say. This poem comes from deeply endowed emotion. Until you decide that it is not somebody who will rescue you; That it is in fact you. Yourself. You will never find escape. A beautifully true and sincere write. I hope you see the end of the tunnel Alicia. And the light it gives way to

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2017

Suffering is inspiration for a poet. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

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Mizzy ........ 01 October 2016

They say that ' a problem shared is a problem halved '......this poem is from the soul.... Keep on writing!

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Dan Reynolds 11 March 2016

Alicia, please re-read and edit this poem. There is no issue with the repetition at the start of each line. This is an established and recognised poetic form of embellishment. However, the typo's have used everY, twice...... I might consider breaking the last two lines into three.... Danny.

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Connor Whyte 28 February 2016

I think this writing is great extremely dark and filled with sadness, your emotions spread fluently and are all there. Life is only as beautiful as you want to make it, I can sense a strong feeling of emptiness in the chasm of your heart but you will never be alone find the beauty in your own reality and maybe then you will release that suffering inside.

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Fog Runner 25 February 2016

You're fatigued from prolonged suffering, young woman. But you should take a look around and decide to enjoy the scenery as this desert you're in is not boundless and cannot hold you captive forever.

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