Colleen Courtney

Rookie - 45 Points (10/13/65 / Massachusetts)

Wind - Poem by Colleen Courtney

As the wind howls outside
It knocks at the windowpanes
It whistles through the doors
But yet silently
I hear it whisper your name.

Over and over
Again and again
Your name
Drifts through my air
Envelops my space
It encompasses my world
And quietly shatters my soul.

How I used to love
These wind tossed nights
As we lay side by side.

The wind now
Is like liquid poison
It seeps through my veins
Insidious to my being.

How I despise the wind.


Comments about Wind by Colleen Courtney

  • Silver Star - 3,901 Points Ken E Hall (7/24/2014 2:58:00 AM)

    love is in the air whistling in the wind and storms of emotion turned the tide of love...life is so fickle at times for so many reasons...lovely write indeed (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Jacqueline Nash (7/21/2014 7:43:00 AM)

    Sad poem, beautifully written. Blew me away! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Vivek Mishra (7/3/2014 2:14:00 PM)

    Felt Blowin' in the wind, nicely woven poetry, your writing is awesome. :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 6:38:00 PM)

    Your name
    Drifts through my air.... nice one....10

    makes as if whistle blow
    touch my ears and go
    whisper slowly the name
    which i like most and claim (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,753 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/22/2014 2:06:00 AM)

    A gentle wind turning into a gale when it carries memories of anguish.................nicely composed.............. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,170 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/15/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    Memories are always associated with various beauties and comforts of nature. Wind is a nice example and an impressive poem as well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/8/2014 9:41:00 AM)

    Toss in the turbulence of the wind
    but rest in the tranquilly of the breeze.
    Good write, articulating loss in a powerful message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (6/7/2014 4:08:00 AM)

    How beautiful and sad. It says so much about loss and unhappiness and the kind of pain that never goes away. It's always there under the skin like an old wound that never heals. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/30/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    Nice poem! You write very well :) Thanks for your comments on my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 367 Points Timothy Caffery (5/25/2014 9:12:00 PM)

    Wow! I learned from Joseph Campbell & studying Buddhism (not one) , that the air really means a Jungian type collective consciousness, or even my mind; and that the wind (Buddhism has a doctrine: The 8 Winds) , mean ideas, possibly, but not redundantly, thoughts. I'm glad I read this one first, I'm already blown away. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,756 Points Daniel Brick (5/22/2014 11:42:00 AM)

    This poem goes beyond the bittersweet of loss and change. It's as if the wind is mocking you by speaking the name of the lost one so insistently, so heartlessly. What was once a wonderful experience is now painful to the point of being soul-shattering, and I can't think of a more terminal description of the impact of loss. Literally, your poem is a mix of related memories, eg. the coziness of sleeping together as the wind howls outside. But figuratively the wind is now a malign agent of loss, keeping you awake, blasting the loss again and again into your consciousness. The last line is as much closure as this experience will permit. The rest is endurance. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,575 Points Rohit Sapra (5/13/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    You write brilliantly and your emotions are really powerful. Liked this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (5/2/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    An amazing write. It really permeates and swallows you up into the melancholy abyss of emotion at is core. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hannah Kelly (5/2/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    I love the association in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 255 Points Matthew Edan Oliver Palma (4/28/2014 2:57:00 PM)

    Always loved poems about the wind... and this one is a truly great write.: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jay Hall (3/31/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,656 Points Mr. Nobody (3/18/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    The calm always comes after the wind. I hope it has found you, perfect one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 14, 2014


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