Stillness pursues in each step
As a revamp of old boldness
Misty lane seems cringed as lone
Till the frozen yard of blows
Serenity steals gusts its way
As that passion warmth its loft
Mist speak all warmth in stripes
To relish the fumes of crazy winter
Rainbow stretches on heavens lap
Painted yard that sniff its warmth
Heavenly tract that loom a daze
To be a part of heavens bright
Rays is veiled in each start
Lucent than everyday tact
Frozen step slips on empty lane
To be in tempting hands of winter! ! !
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You have portrayed a rich kaleidoscope of winter. An engaging poem nicely penned.
I read other poems on winter but particularly your poem expresses different mood of winter. Nicely penned.
a lovely portrait of love of nature Rainbow stretches on heavens lap Painted yard that sniff its warmth Heavenly tract that loom a daze To be a part of heavens bright
Rays is veiled in each start Lucent than everyday tact Frozen step slips on empty lane To be in tempting hands of winter! ! ! Description of winter in specific style, it's a nice poem.
On heaven's lap rainbow stretches after reading such a beautifully penned poem. Strong imagery of this poem shines in each line and fills colour in mind like rain bow. Beautiful.
Very well penned with amazing lines on winter........very very outstanding......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem on winter. with many fantastic lines.. Rays is veiled in each start Lucent than everyday tact Frozen step slips on empty lane To be in tempting hands of winter! ! ! Loved it.