With Good Note Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Good Note

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The life begins with good note
Everybody wished to denote
On positive note to do better
Something bad can be assumed later

People try to live
And believe
In good faith
Till the end of life or death

Couples do commit
To live peacefully and greet
Come off any trouble
That may warrant struggle

Why do we have confusion?
With ideas and resolutions
It is needed desperately
But must be faced bravely

We know what we are doing
And in life actually proving
To be honest
To do the best

We too also know
That it will be late to go
To his door for grace
We need to have smile on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

What he just said. Ditto 1 hour ago by just me | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 48 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

its well composed and put together MAMMIKI MAKHOSANE38 minutes ago i like this stanza most Why do we have confusion? With ideas and resolutions It is needed desperately But must be faced bravely its full of courage despite pain

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

The life begins with good note Everybody wished to denote

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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