With One Blink Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With One Blink

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With one blink

You always miss
Old friends and school class
Where you used to fight and play
then to home with good stay

how teachers used to advise?
Help others and give promise
If you can fulfill then only
The topics used to be touchy

I was attentive
And lived
With ideals
That seemed to be unreal

I was growing with maturity
To become great entity
With no idea of how to shape
But I was putting ahead one step

Today I look back and think
The whole scene passed with one blink
The village, friends and narrow street
I feel they are waiting for me to greet

With One Blink
Sunday, January 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2016

Today I look back and think The whole scene passed with one blink The village, friends and narrow street I feel they are waiting for me to greet

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 January 2016

Fond memoirs of childhood friends and school shared through a beautiful poem. Thanks.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 January 2016

welcome Nel Pasayon Acido Dayo Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 January 2016

welcome Gaytri patel

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2016

welcome Rajani Champaneri likes this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min 6 hours ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2016

welcome Kevin Mcgrath, Gayatri Patel Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 1 hour ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2016

welcome cecil 54 minutes ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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