With..... [ With This And With That; A Poem Written 'by Mistake'; Very Short ] Poem by Bri Edwards

With..... [ With This And With That; A Poem Written 'by Mistake'; Very Short ]



['Accompanied by', 'joined to', 'in addition to': these, 'WITH' does mean.]

Chocolate layer cake WITH ice cream (flavored by vanilla bean) .
She 'came down WITH' a cold; at least that's what she told her boss!
A roasted duck breast, WITH potatoes....and orange or cherry sauce.

[I meant to write about 'WHITE', but I wrote 'WITH' by mistake.]

Golden french fries WITH catsup, WITH a strawberry...milkshake.
I like when she is WITH me, in our comfy bed at night.
Warm apple pie (WITH a slice of cheese) ...right now sounds awfully right.

[I could go ON and ON with 'WITH-lines' to keep from being bored.]

Her mind was filled WITH a morbid thought before she...pulled her ripcord.
You may be shocked the previous line is WITHout a reference to food.
If you think that I'm so regimented, then I think YOU're Rather Rude.

(11-26-2010)

Sunday, June 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: food,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i hope you enjoy. no explanation needed. (submitted 3? years ago)
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i edited this (mostly the punctuation) in October 2016, for the October showcase, Section B.

bri :)

yes, i KNOW i had MORE than one 'with' line that did not mention food!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 29 March 2014

This is a very good mistake. The poem sort of made me laugh and smile. I really like it. Bien!

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Elena Plotkin 27 August 2013

I whole-heartedly agree with Charles Darnell. A enjoyable read had me smiling to the very end.

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Charles Darnell 05 July 2013

This was fun. You are a poet WITH a delicious sense of humor.

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