Without You Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Without You

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Let the light of our happy moments, shining like stars
I may need it while passing through the tunnel.

The journey is so long,
With so many ups and downs.

Let the spirit plagiarize me up,
And your remembrance slides me down.

This balance is needed to remain a humane
Else erupting volcano will make me wander.

We learned many lessons together in life
In all those situations which came to pass.

Let me revise it once again without you
And realise what differences it’s going to do

I know it’s going be a bumpy ride
Still, I am ready to stand and fight

I let all worries to evaporate in sky
This light I must carry without you, till I die.

Monday, August 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 31 August 2015

Last lines are amazing, , , , .............10 I let all worries to evaporate in sky This light I must carry without you, till I die.

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Sanjukta Nag 31 August 2015

Though the lover's heart is broken, still we find positive hope in him which is a must needed thing in our life. very inspirational. thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2015

Let me revise it once again without you And realise what differences it’s going to do.....Fathomless thoughts twinkle here so brilliantly in your pen. Interesting and amusing poem. Thanks for sharing. ......10

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