Woman, A Heavenly Creation Poem by Jyoti Patil

Woman, A Heavenly Creation

Rating: 5.0


Being gifted to be emotional,
Woman is always at the receiving end,
Being gifted to be more sensible,
Man always takes advantage of that.
Being passionate in her attitude,
She is mostly misunderstood and misjudged,
Being soft in showing her mettle
She is mostly cheated by man.
Being truthful and sincere,
She mostly has a rough path to tread upon,
She is wonderfully gifted with moral strength,
She is God's wonderful creation.
Being softer at heart and delicate in health,
But strong in her approach,
She is an ideal mother, an able sister,
A loving wife and an adorable daughter.
She has an immense capacity
To listen, to understand, to care and to support
Whenever man needs it,
Standing up for righteousness
And for unconditional love with all integrity
She is a heavenly combination
Of caring, charm, beauty, and grace.

Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: womanhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

Madam, you are absolutely correct! This is general but not specific. I liked your expression, 'She mostly has a rough path to tread upon, She is wonderfully gifted with moral strength, She is God's wonderful creation'....top score and to my favorite.

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Chinedu Dike 05 October 2016

An insightful depiction of the essence of womanhood, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. A lovely tribute to women elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Jyoti. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 October 2016

think about.. :) Thanks for sharing

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