Would It! Memory Fails…1510** Poem by saadat tahir

Would It! Memory Fails…1510**

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Oh would it today, that memory fails,
memories waft from billowing sails.

Candles of desire, snuffed, taint.
ravish abodes of yon acquaint.

obtains naught that moment mars.
sores, flowers or distant stars.

Account oh not! yon fleeting seasons.
Of days; lived, suffered, past reasons.

Howsoever spent these listless days.
Blame ye why, the lifeless sways.

Now no welling moan, if ever was.
Forget, not bemoan the fated cause.

So often desires, withered wishes,
diminish not the distance, swishes.

Sometimes those that move on,
inspire not the heart, are better gone

Islamabd
(Oct 15,2009)

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Adapted rendering:
Originally in Urdu…
by Ahmad Faraz
A noted, very well known, contemporary and acclaimed poet…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 15 October 2009

Fantastic as usual....last four lines are logically true

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rago rago 15 October 2009

gracious to read............................

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Yasmin Khan 20 July 2013

We have many candles of desire that are snuffed by the winds of Time. An admirable adaptation from a well-known poet.

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Gita Ashok 02 July 2010

Account oh not! yon fleeting seasons. Of days; lived, suffered, past reasons. Beautiful and impressive lines! They make one take a walk down memeory lane. Thanks for sharing.

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Rafique Farooqi 30 October 2009

it is deep and graceful thought............and you are our great medical personel who has tender heart

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Ejaz Khan 15 October 2009

You're getting better and better in rhyme, rhythm and content. Indeed Ahmed Faraz was a very good contemprary urdu poet, a beautiful piece!

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Catrina Heart 15 October 2009

great theme and stunningly written piece! ! !

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