X..... Gentle In Reverse (Mirror Sestet) Poem by Aufie Zophy
X..... Gentle In Reverse (Mirror Sestet)
Keen on suit and tie, but what do coat and tie mean?
Mean indeed, can the gentlemen be if only on money they're keen
Lean on compassion, liking to put up a scene
Seen as handsome but on their shoulder not a cripple could lean
Obscene in their language, always looking clean.
Clean hanky in pocket, but harassing a teen, truly obscene
Wow! , really fascinating...beautiful message within those nicely crafted words. You are really venturing into the world of greater possibilities....keep going Hans. A perfect 10.
Fascinating, especially as I've never seen the 'mirroring' in simply a sestet form yet. Looks well done, if substituting the same-sounding word seen/scene is acceptable, which variations are usually allowed. Fascinating and thought-provoking. I enjoyed the entire piece. Excellent! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:00:38 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The mask of out worldly well dressed people is humorously exposed. Thought provoking poem.