Treasure Island

Aufie Zophy

(18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon


I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

I brought this balloon, so blue
all the way, especially for you

So, quick, quick, quick
Give this balloon a prick

let's bathe in its content
a sea of love, to never end


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Aufie Zophy
Bachok

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Submitted: Sunday, October 07, 2012
Edited: Friday, June 21, 2013

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A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

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  • Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! ! (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Spiritual Seeker (10/7/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    let's bathe in its content
    a sea of love, to never end....yes, true love is deeper than the sea....without end. V nice, a big 10. (Report) Reply

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