Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,819 Points (18 October 1964)

Y... Flood - Poem by Aufie Zophy


Can you feel the monsoon of love
Can you feel the typhoon of kindness
Can you feel the hurricane of care
that are about to make sane this world

Just open your eyes and ears
Just open your hands and heart
and be a part of the flood
of love, kindness and care...


Comments about Y... Flood by Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie - 17 Points Cristina Teodor (11/2/2011 6:09:00 PM)

    Love, kindness and care metaphorically seen as a force of nature. Nice written..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,710 Points Walterrean Salley (10/30/2011 9:12:00 PM)

    Just open your eyes and ears
    Just open your hands and heart
    and be a part of the flood
    of love, kindness and care...

    Beautiful. Great images to accomplish your goal here. A powerful message. I'd love to be a part of such flood. Thanks. Really good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (10/29/2011 6:50:00 PM)

    Something happen and it might be the tools to wash away human arrogance and require acceptance without condition...! ! ! the misery is always comes with reason and face it with faith and understanding.... no sadness nor happiness remain herewith us forever.
    Wisdom in the poem, excellent! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/29/2011 4:15:00 AM)

    And be a part of this flood, I like it... Love is so easy to give, but so hard to take... And it's as powerful as monsoons, typhoons and hurricanes when it hits you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 478 Points Ency Bearis (10/29/2011 3:55:00 AM)

    Nice simile poem, well versed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 28, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 25, 2012


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