Y... Flood Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... Flood

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Can you feel the monsoon of love
Can you feel the typhoon of kindness
Can you feel the hurricane of care
that are about to make sane this world

Just open your eyes and ears
Just open your hands and heart
and be a part of the flood
of love, kindness and care...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cristina Teodor 02 November 2011

Love, kindness and care metaphorically seen as a force of nature. Nice written..Cristina Teodor

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Walterrean Salley 30 October 2011

Just open your eyes and ears Just open your hands and heart and be a part of the flood of love, kindness and care... Beautiful. Great images to accomplish your goal here. A powerful message. I'd love to be a part of such flood. Thanks. Really good work.

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Malaya Roses 29 October 2011

Something happen and it might be the tools to wash away human arrogance and require acceptance without condition...! ! ! the misery is always comes with reason and face it with faith and understanding.... no sadness nor happiness remain herewith us forever. Wisdom in the poem, excellent! ! ! !

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Jacqui Broad 29 October 2011

And be a part of this flood, I like it... Love is so easy to give, but so hard to take... And it's as powerful as monsoons, typhoons and hurricanes when it hits you.

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Ency Bearis 29 October 2011

Nice simile poem, well versed

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