Aufie Zophy

Silver Star - 3,205 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ Heart Of The Monsoon - Poem by Aufie Zophy

In the heart of the monsoon
The sky decided to undress
Blue skin and a yellow soul
Rays of light and warmth caress

Bright white teeth on laughing waves
Trees smiling with wet green eyes
Dark cloud above the sea seeming shy
brightening up a bit or at least it tries

But then the cloud decides
The story ends too soon
And streaming rains return
In the heart of the monsoon


Poet's Notes about The Poem

we tend to appreciate the sun much more in this season

Comments about Y/ Heart Of The Monsoon by Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (1/28/2013 8:19:00 PM)

    So beautiful and the rhyming too. I love monsoon...cooler. Its dry in Belgaum now. Great 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 827 Points Yasmeen Khan (1/21/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    It depicts a vivid picture...a highly metaphorical poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,604 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/29/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Beautiful scenes of monsoon! It is raining almost everyday in KL now! well done! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,125 Points Elena Sandu (12/26/2012 7:19:00 AM)

    Oh dear, I am inlove now! With one delicate beauty: the night! With laughing waves and a shy cloud! This is more than a craft it feels it as a real gift of life, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,753 Points Hazel Durham (12/24/2012 7:22:00 AM)

    Amazing imagery, so beautifully written! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,990 Points * Sunprincess * (12/23/2012 11:04:00 PM)

    sounds beautiful and dangerous..very intriguing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (12/23/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    It sounds like you were in the middle. So clear picture. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (12/22/2012 5:03:00 PM)

    Beautiful description, a great write, I enjoyed the poem very much

    We just get floods here then more floods, (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (12/22/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (12/22/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (12/22/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,358 Points Unwritten Soul (12/22/2012 8:53:00 AM)

    Yeah when too hot we wish for the rain....then it mean actually we could feel that both are blessing for us...just the way they are in different time haha_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 20, 2013


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