Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,107 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. Never Waiting Again


While waiting in a queue or jam
Let's try to connect to our heart
And search for a lovely feeling

While waiting for the elevator
Let's try to connect to our God
And search for a lovely thought

While waiting for a train or plane
Let's try to connect to our universe
And search for some lovely words

We may end up
Never really waiting again!

Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, February 06, 2015

Topic of this poem: love


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if we can turn waiting from something stressful into something beautiful, useful, our next wait will no longer feel like a wait

Comments about this poem (Y/. Never Waiting Again by Aufie Zophy )

  • Gold Star - 6,710 Points Amitava Sur (2/6/2015 9:12:00 PM)

    A lovely idea, given to the readers to console and find peace of life.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,601 Points Lyn Paul (2/6/2015 4:51:00 PM)

    So beautiful Aufie. If nothing we have our minds and your words express the way we should be using the mind. Rather then filling it with unnecessary demands.
    So please I stopped by. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,094 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/6/2015 9:49:00 AM)

    keep patience be happy enjoy (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,236 Points John Richter (2/6/2015 6:53:00 AM)

    The true beauty, the true wonderment is not in the destination - but the journey. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (2/6/2015 3:58:00 AM)

    Like this. Question, is cue the American spelling of queue? In the UK cue is a billard cue. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 866 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (2/6/2015 3:22:00 AM)

    good poem...waiting is part of living...suspense in what we will find in the end is also part of the whole package; can't escape it... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (12/19/2013 12:46:00 AM)

    a wonderful message for the readers, , , , nice, , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (12/7/2013 1:14:00 AM)

    beautiful way to consume wisely the time with love of god (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 619 Points Louis Rams (9/10/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    we wait for everything in life , but the one thing we never have to wait for is - GODS LOVE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 619 Points Louis Rams (9/10/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    we wait for everything in life , but the one thing we never have to wait for is - GODS LOVE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/3/2013 8:41:00 AM)

    a fine poem on realistic style (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,822 Points Smoky Hoss (9/1/2013 7:32:00 PM)

    Yes indeed, such good advice, that may truly give peace to the soul. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (9/1/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    Very profound thought.Really, we must try to get connected with the universal power! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,196 Points Elena Sandu (9/1/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    Connection and patience taught in such a beautiful way! A gorgeous poem, thank you for share! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/18/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    connecting with this world around us is very important. always stay in touch (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (8/15/2013 6:33:00 AM)

    The poem had been filled with wisdom and hope for tomorrow. Chance is always there but life is so uncertain with too many possibility and probability. Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (8/7/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    So true! A very rewarding mental exercise! Thank you for this beautiful tip to drive away the boredom of waiting! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/5/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    I forget these things and I can't find the words to my next poem, Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,094 Points Valerie Dohren (8/4/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    To use those waiting moments to meditate - sounds like a good idea to me. Lovely thought expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (7/28/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    I had an apprentice once I sent to the chemist for a long wait. They sent him back after half hour! I agree with what you say. This is a good piece of free verse with a good message. (Report) Reply

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