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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,180 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ When I feel low


When I feel low in energy
I make a walk on the beach
I think of the goodness of God
I think a positive thought
And I do not feel low anymore

Submitted: Friday, May 17, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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  • Rookie - 907 Points Ken E Hall (5/31/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    Mind over matter in this short poem with the thoughts of our maker who makes your day lift, love the way you travel...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Joseph Anderson (5/25/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    Ever so sweet. A stroll through natures beauty will lift one's spirits. A brief
    and endearing write, with some lasting thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,854 Points Valsa George (5/22/2013 11:49:00 PM)

    So very true! As we don't have a beach close by, I take a stroll through the country lanes, quiet and rich in greenery! The poem is lean but lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (5/22/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    Yes...observing nature at its best...is a form of zikr, remembrance of the Creator Himself! Beautiful short write...a big 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,320 Points Wahab Abdul (5/19/2013 11:10:00 PM)

    a very utilitarian thought..thank you giving motivation..this is a universal truth.. you made it.. love it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 657 Points Unwritten Soul (5/18/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    The vibration from the softness inside the foam,
    the golden shine from the sand
    they sending you a touch from Him
    that you always not alone, He always there..
    Anywhere is your home_Soul (Report) Reply

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