You Can Do It.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

You Can Do It..

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The world is such a small place,
Where I can't hide my face,
The Heart is such a big cave,
Where I can't fill all my love,
The Sky is not such a fashionable screen,
Where I can't catwalk to be a beauty queen,
The thought is such a deep mineral ocean,
Where I can dive to the depth to bring out the gems.

Monday, September 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 September 2014

Best imaginations and beautiful poem.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2014

Hello poet Veeraiyah, I enjoyed your poem. Loyd

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Amitava Sur 15 September 2014

So rightly the meaningful things are said here Thanks for sharing.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 September 2014

I love this poem of introspection

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Patricia Grantham 12 September 2014

I just love the line the thought is such a deep mineral ocean. So many beautiful things can be found there. You are so right. Noble thinking this is. Enjoyed.

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Somanathan Iyer 11 September 2014

A nice poem with meaningful imaginations.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 September 2014

Yes I Can...A poem that is full of vigor, nice message ...those who keep the verve, life their way deserve

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