You Give Me Poem by Neela Nath Das

You Give Me

Rating: 5.0


You give me the delight,
When the readers' faces
Flash like light.
My pain I paint on your chest
Aches them with same pain
And gives me balmy rest.
You are my poetry
You know what works in me
You set my emotion free.

Wednesday, August 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 22 August 2015

Freed emotion a great thing indeed feels like flowers not a single weed

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 October 2015

My pain I paint on your chest you are my poetry you set my emotion free. so wonderful romantic sense in your words and in your poem. thank you very much. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Deeply envisioned and nicely depicted. A beautifuI poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.....10

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Muhammad Ali 20 September 2015

We create a world inside us. Then we like to live inside that. Nice poem. Just like this, The Great Creator also receives something interesting from us!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 August 2015

Wow passionate and lovely in expression! Short n sweet. Poetic feelings. Kudos.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2015

Love is dripping from lines thick. Loved it Neela.

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