You Made Me Cry Poem by ramesh rai

You Made Me Cry

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You dehumidified your all tears
and lent me to make me cry.

Oh Niger!
your onus were all silent
the waves did not roar
could you not listen their plaintive tone.

Oh the stars!
you were too stagnant
did you not twinkle that night

Had the humanity lost its pace
what the earth has tolerated that night.

Oh Moon!
why you are always cool and calm
how long you will bear the stain.

Sunday, May 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 18 May 2014

Lost in a cruel world of suffering that nature's light can't remove our pain of the stain of hardships Superb write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Moon will bear the stain, stars will not twinkle as they witnessed that humanity lost its pace... Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur 01 June 2014

Loved the poem in expressing your emotions... very nice in deed

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Dave Walker 25 May 2014

An emotion packed poem, a great write.

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sorrowness perfectly written a good poem and likes it.

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The mighty river, the stars, and the moon cannot come to help in this hour of need. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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