You'Re The Sun In Moon Poem by Patti Masterman

You'Re The Sun In Moon

Rating: 5.0


You're the sun in moon,
The sky under rain,
Rainbow’d water,
In the storms quiet wane.

You're the roosters crow,
The firelights gleam,
As roses in winter,
A baby's dream.

You're laughters tinkle,
The sigh in tears,
Forgiving smile,
The hope of years.

You're the letter found,
On a summers day,
That finally says
What we couldn't say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 21 November 2013

A superb expression of great wonder.

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Johnathan Juarez 15 May 2012

great poem. kinda speechless on this one. these are surprising and so different from your new ones. your on a vast scope. i feel lucky to read these

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Jim Troy 10 August 2011

Another perfect 10 from my perfect friend........... Your spirit reveals itself clearly within the vibrations of this beauty........... Jim Troy

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Constance K Yost 04 August 2011

Excellent work- every line, every word so carefully chosen! A true enjoyment! ! Constance

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Tsira Gogeshvili 10 June 2011

it's so lovely, Patti..10... Tsira

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