You Save Me Poem by Samantha Rose Turner

You Save Me

Rating: 5.0


I stand tall, as the wind blows my hair with its gentle breeze,
It feels like I am flying over the ocean seas.
Like you’re lifting my cares away,
Making more vanish each day.

If this is the price I must pay, I will keep you forever each day.
I feel like im being protected, As if im connected to you.
I feel like you watch over me, like you want to set me free.
Set me free of all of my pain, end this awful game.

I love the way you speak, its like heaven's angel's singing.
Your eyes look at me so softly I feel like the world is calmed.
Your heart burns like fire, each time you see me.
This proves you love me.

I can tell, from the way you walk, and each time you talk.
I can tell from the way you smile, how it only happens around me.
This is the way my life should be.

Not a care it the world to take me away,
Not a soul in the world to hurt me that way.
Just you, to make me laugh and pretended I’m always okay.
I have a few words to say to you,
And that’s, I Love You.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deep Mukherjee 10 January 2012

Great work at a very small age.......very pure expressions of emotions :)

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Binish Cd 07 January 2012

a real expression of the feelings of love...............good work..........

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Vipins Puthooran 03 January 2012

Wow, an excellent love poem/ good feelings! ! ! Top marks! ! !

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