Your Contribution Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Your Contribution



In the frozen world of lovelessness
You are my igloo
You are true friend in my cheerless days
With you I'm Cando

In the ruthless world of war and hate
You are my soul's peace
When you are with me I feel so great
I feel heaven's bliss

On the hilly way to my success
You are a strong rope
When my life is full of hopelessness
You give me sweet hope

In the prosy world of selfishness
You are my fancy
With you I am full of manliness
Without you pansy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It is a modest admission of a dear person`s contribution. The lines can boast of lyrical beauty and literary charm. A good tribute to her/ him(?)

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Hazel Durham 10 December 2012

A beautiful write with lovely imagery in appreciation of your loved one!

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Unwritten Soul 09 December 2012

I am sure the Igloo got sun warm radiating from the ice block..that's why you feel so comfortable to be inside your feeling..a nice garment of words to wear in mind, heat the cold! _Soul

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Valsa George 09 December 2012

An enjoyable read! A great acknowledgement to that person who is your inspiration and guiding soul! !

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Kingsley U. Ayi 08 December 2012

Up to par, I really like this

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 08 December 2012

This is a nice and lovely poem. I really like your lyric. Such a nice way of appreciating friendship. A very nice poem it really is. Keep it up!

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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