Zoology Poem by John W. McEwers

Zoology

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Mammals lay no eggs outside of their bodies because they lay them inside of their bodies.
Marsupials carry babies around in sacks like babies are groceries from the corner carry-out.
Fish passively lay eggs in giant areas so that just about anything that wants to can attempt to germinate.
Birds make nests.
Where does John fit in?

Snakes leave their skin on the ground because they are comfortable without it.
Trees leave leafs to die around them to fertilize.
Sheep need their wool to be taken from them or else they'll get too hot.
Sharks have too many teeth to keep.
What does John have to lose?


At the bottom of the ocean are giant squid like the kraken.
At the tops of Sequoia live exotic rodents.
In the middle of mountains are either precious metals or dragons.
And in outer space there could be aliens or angels.
What is habitat for John?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 July 2014

excuse me, but: The platypus (Ornithorhynchus anatinus) is a semiaquatic mammal endemic to eastern Australia, including Tasmania. Together with the four species of echidna, it is one of the five extant species of monotremes, the only mammals that lay eggs instead of giving birth. ......from wikipedia did you mean fertilize when you typed germinate? i hope 'john' finds the answers to his questions, if he wants to find them... thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Kevin Patrick 25 February 2012

A rich tapestry of ideas, with a great subject its beautiful though very melancholic especially the last line on each cinquain. I like how on the first stanza you refer to species on the second species and on the third mythical creatures. A great idea fantastically executed.

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John W. McEwers

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