so close but yet so far,
so bright but not yet a star,
almost famous,
but still nameless.
aldo i know some day
you will know what my name is.
01/11/2008
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
The most important thing we have is our identity.One day Jose you WILL achieve fame if you need it bad enough.Great theme well thought out. Sid.
I know what your name is.. this is deep with much thought. the sun will shine soon.
everyone is a star even if we don't know it yet, good job i like it. =]
Hopefull and lovely poem which shows your innocent thoughts...
Nicely done. I often wonder about those who are waiting in the wings, only one step away from stardom which for so many never comes. They are left waiting in the wings.
Yes Sir......definitely one day she is going to know that... 10
so short yet it is such a good poem! ! bravo! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)
I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very touching. May your dream one day be realized. Warm regards, Sandra