our love was like a fish out the sea,
like a blind person who couldn't see,
like a star that was no longer bright,
our love was a struggling fight
our love was like a dove who could't fly,
like the ocean that went dry,
like a sun with out the shine,
i remember you once were mine
our love was just a moment in time,
our love i believe was a crime,
our love was, our love is?
our love should have never been like this........
1/14/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
Differnt view to describe love...words are simple and touching...great work..! ! !
OoHh..! amazing poem i swear.. where did u get this from..? !
your way of writing is facsinating.never stop writing.This poem was nice too...
A very good flow of feel and expressions...very good lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written, great rhythm and flow to the peice. Job well done! :)