Ray Lucero


15 Minutes Of Ecstasy (For Lovers) - Poem by Ray Lucero

Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me

On downy pillow her flaxen
locks did adorn,
Heated passion thru me rushed
“Oh, sweet agony”

Hungry hands explored the
fullness of her landscape,
I felt the roundness of her breasts
a nipple I did pinch

Ere long, my veiled heart
she’d soon undrape,
She moaned a sigh of pleasure,
and gave a subtle flinch

Two bodies conjoined in bliss
all else did fade away,
Earth nor God Himself
would dare interfere

I in her, her in me
our love we'd not betray,
Our sacred act felt no guilt
as finish then grew near

'15 minutes of ecstasy' as
two lovers fulfilled as one

She morphed into nights Silver Moon,
and I the Central Sun

ROTMS


Comments about 15 Minutes Of Ecstasy (For Lovers) by Ray Lucero

  • Rookie Al Ramos (9/13/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    ! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Robert E Hann (11/2/2007 9:46:00 AM)

    Ray,
    A very sensual write. May I share with you my 'Poem Erotica'
    Robert (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (10/17/2007 5:00:00 PM)

    it takes two make a completer entity my friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lucianne Fasolo (9/13/2007 10:19:00 AM)

    This was beautiful, I loved it!
    Wonderful job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (1/6/2007 1:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful, absolutly beautiful........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Milly Hunter (8/14/2006 5:08:00 PM)

    Oh how magically some are so blessed by God; this was elaborately majestic, with a real romantic flair. Brilliantly ascribe, well done~! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Milly Hunter (5/13/2006 10:26:00 PM)

    This metaphor is draped with quite a creative surprise, still romantically breathtaking all the same. Quite the clever muse with a charming twist of uniqueness, for sure.

    Brilliantly romantic~!
    ~Milly (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (3/31/2006 6:03:00 PM)

    Filled with passion.Intimate in a tasteful way

    Patricia Gale (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moya Levy (3/24/2006 2:43:00 PM)

    Beautifully done Ray, tender and nice, Moyax (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Stephens (1/21/2006 7:51:00 PM)

    Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (12/7/2005 12:20:00 PM)

    Such an intimate poem.............not over the edge with eroticism.........you kept it beautiful. That's nice. sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ***** ********* (12/6/2005 2:42:00 PM)

    Blimey Ray! I'd rather have the ecstacy than the fame, if I had the choice in your poem. The nippled pinching made me flinch though! 10 from Chocy Chip Tai! lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ronberge .. (12/6/2005 2:40:00 PM)

    I know I'll get flak for this but...

    Just fifteen minutes?

    Just kidding!
    Amicalement votre,
    Ronberge (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (12/6/2005 2:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful! ! Seductive! ! ! Very nice! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 6, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 21, 2008


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