Treasure Island

Ray Lucero


Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me

On downy pillow her flaxen
locks did adorn,
Heated passion thru me rushed
“Oh, sweet agony”

Hungry hands explored the
fullness of her landscape,
I felt the roundness of her breasts
a nipple I did pinch

Ere long, my veiled heart
she’d soon undrape,
She moaned a sigh of pleasure,
and gave a subtle flinch

Two bodies conjoined in bliss
all else did fade away,
Earth nor God Himself
would dare interfere

I in her, her in me
our love we'd not betray,
Our sacred act felt no guilt
as finish then grew near

'15 minutes of ecstasy' as
two lovers fulfilled as one

She morphed into nights Silver Moon,
and I the Central Sun


Submitted: Tuesday, December 06, 2005
Edited: Sunday, September 21, 2008

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  • Al Ramos (9/13/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    ! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad. (Report) Reply

  • Milly Hunter (8/14/2006 5:08:00 PM)

    Oh how magically some are so blessed by God; this was elaborately majestic, with a real romantic flair. Brilliantly ascribe, well done~! (Report) Reply

  • Milly Hunter (5/13/2006 10:26:00 PM)

    This metaphor is draped with quite a creative surprise, still romantically breathtaking all the same. Quite the clever muse with a charming twist of uniqueness, for sure.

    Brilliantly romantic~!
    ~Milly (Report) Reply

  • Michael Stephens (1/21/2006 7:51:00 PM)

    Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Mary Nagy (12/7/2005 12:20:00 PM)

    Such an intimate poem.............not over the edge with kept it beautiful. That's nice. sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • ***** ********* (12/6/2005 2:42:00 PM)

    Blimey Ray! I'd rather have the ecstacy than the fame, if I had the choice in your poem. The nippled pinching made me flinch though! 10 from Chocy Chip Tai! lol (Report) Reply

  • Ronberge .. (12/6/2005 2:40:00 PM)

    I know I'll get flak for this but...

    Just fifteen minutes?

    Just kidding!
    Amicalement votre,
    Ronberge (Report) Reply

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