♥ 09/03/2008 B Eyes The Passion The Fire ♥ Poem by Coreena Dejesus
♥ 09/03/2008 B Eyes The Passion The Fire ♥
Deep passionate eyes telling a story,
Showing every down fall and potential glory.
Your eyes looking deeply inside mine,
Telling me showing me how I missed the signs.
Your eyes drawing me in having me want more,
Showing me your plan what you have in store.
Your deep brown eyes staring reading mine,
Knowing what our love could be if combined.
Showing me how you feel as if I was reading your heart,
Telling me I have nothing to fear once we are apart.
They explain to me how much I mean to you,
Showing me how long you waited to pursue.
The looks explain how much we are one of a kind,
They keep us constantly on each other’s mind.
I can’t ignore the passion your eyes bring,
This could never be mistaken as just a fling.
I get lost in your eyes as I sit and stare,
Under my breathe I let out a single prayer.
Lord I put this situation in your control,
Because I know eyes are the window to the soul.
I can’t deny I know this is going to go somewhere,
To deny my feelings would just be unfair.
I’m afraid of falling “in love” with you,
But this feeling I have I have to pursue.
SEP 2008 (Dedicated to Travis Allen)
Don't worry about the 'falling' part of love. It's the sudden stop that will get ya. My poem, 'Lovers Leap, ' plays with this same concept. The poem, just like LOVE is more complicated that it first looks. The title implies a high cliff that lovers in despair jump off. However, I did not use the 's. 'Lovers' is just plural. If you get a chance to look at the poem, you'll see my opinion is that 'we don't fall in love/rather we leap at each other.' Thanks for you comment on my poem 'IRISH LOVE.' The joke was told to me my a guy who should know, and also, know better not to let his wife overhear.
what a nice rhyme.................with passion all around! nice piece coreena.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 12:41:38 PM # 1.0.0.1119
wow what a romantic piece..liked it..hmm well done 10/10