♥ 03/04/2008 B Crying Because I Love ♥ Poem by Coreena Dejesus

♥ 03/04/2008 B Crying Because I Love ♥

Rating: 4.5


When we are over were not over I'll be your friend,
Sorry that our passionate love didn't last till the end,
I still love you so very much this is so true,
I could have spent every moment of my life with you.

I imagined my self having your child,
A precious little baby that looked up and smiled.
To live our lifes till death did us part,
But it won't happen doomed from the start.

It hurts that I know this chapter of us will close,
I hate to say it but we weren't meant for each other, I suppose.
The pain that I feel the tears brought by you,
Your lies broke me down, lies more than a few.

I gave you so many chances and so much time,
My tears falling writing - typing every line!
I will always love you and if you ever need me I'll be there,
What I had with you no one could compare.

March 2008 - (Dedicated to Vernon Burchett)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar ... 05 March 2008

nice one from the depth of the heart

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

u have a heart of a true lover.....i liked it

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I know this feeling.... heartfelt. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 06 March 2008

this is so sad, you can sense the emotions are flowing like a river in this poem. I hope you find happiness with someone else who's meant to give you all the things you mentioned herein. HG: -) xx

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Frostie Lisette 06 March 2008

This means a lot i knowhowthis is like its quite sad and ur a very unique writer

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Afzal Shauq 09 January 2010

awesome..lovely and professinally written piece.great task...10/10

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Siddharth Singh 18 July 2009

As a reader i can hear the poet's heart cry. Very nice.

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Rani Turton 14 July 2009

Sweet and sad, Coreena. A wonderful poignant read.

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Michael K 10 April 2008

Coreena, I know this pain very well.....another beautiful poem.....sad but very beautiful. Thank you!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 March 2008

yet poignant love as when wistful lost to plume by the reeks of rankling as reasons to reason by the hearts when hold as love when tweaked being rilled upon.............most painful sorrow on the other side...........well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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