03/10/2008 B Death - Not Accepting Not Adapting R.I.P Virginia Poem by Coreena Dejesus

03/10/2008 B Death - Not Accepting Not Adapting R.I.P Virginia

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Tear drops streaming down,
Everyone with a permanent frown,
Sensing the sadness in the room,
The shock the situation hit with a boom.

Our family whispering all dressed in black,
Knowing nothing can get you back,
My heart is sinking your mother has wept,
Answers unknown how do we accept.

Emotions are flying anger setting in,
My heart has falling so far within.
I’m never going to hear your voice,
See you and be able to rejoice.

I miss you and the smile you showed,
Confusion I’m just ready to explode.
Not your time, you weren’t supposed to go,
The reason why only the Lord can only show.

Lord works in mysteries ways that I wont understand,
But I guess you leaving was what he planned.
I’m struggling with this I’m in a constant fight,
Now just waiting for the day for us to reunite.


R.I.P. Virginia I miss you so very much.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 12 March 2008

This lyrical, heartfelt poem comes from great pain and sadness. I'm convinced though that this place, for all it's darkness, is nonetheless a very fertile source of creative expression and your poem certainly reinforces my belief. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Subbaraman N V 12 March 2008

Death has its own rhyme and reason, logic and blessings! Let us understand and accept! We will not shed tears!

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Kholekile Monakali 14 September 2008

nice poem....I enjoyed it a lot readind it keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Fowler 27 March 2008

Sadness falls like a shadow across the lines of this elegy to the memory of Virginia. You honor her with this poem. I am sorry for your loss. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Andrew Blakemore 12 March 2008

A beautiful and most touching poem Coreena. Very well written indeed. Andrew

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Ivor Hogg 12 March 2008

each of us will go in our turn Although I do blieve we meet again in other lives

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Ivor Hogg 12 March 2008

each of us will go in our turn Although I do blieve we meet again in other lives

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Coreena Dejesus

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USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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