A Child Inside Poem by Sharron Stephenson

A Child Inside

Rating: 4.4


i have a burning feeling inside,
like i am been torn apart,
the pain is unbearable,
the flashbacks are the worst,
nightmares are taken the toll on me,
i wish it was all gone there,
are times like now when i wish i was never,
born.

is this due to the feeling i was to blame?
this was all my fault,
he kept saying to me. if i told they would,
not belive me,
and i would be taking away,

could i have dealt? with all the problems,
in a driffrent way,
all this is wrong,

i feel like i what to die right now,

i need help and support,
as this is going to be a long and hard,
road ahead,

could i have stopped this from happening,

i feel like a child trapped in a adult body,
i am so tired all the time,

i wish i could find the on of switch i,
had so i could turn all this of,

is it poss? for me to love someone and,
can someone love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 15 October 2012

the agony has found its outlet in words... which itself has the power to heal... courageous expression!

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Leslie Philibert 15 October 2013

A good poem, although as an old grammarian I prefer I to i.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 15 October 2013

Great poem and I can really feel the pain and the emotions. Touching. Now if you can edit the poem it would be an excellent poem to read with a tremendous touch to the reader's heart because some people cannot get past the spelling to comment on the pain and truth of the your heart.

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Rick Adriolo 21 October 2011

It touched me.. and thats not easy.. so a big 10 from me..

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Robert Wilson 16 January 2012

this poem has a message for us all to learn. that childern should be loved and care for and used for the bad reason. this poem is so powerful, heart felt, soul which should me us sit up and warch the childer grow. i hope the writer of with poem gets the help she and hs the best friends to see her througth

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Savita Tyagi 14 December 2023

such powerful words. Riding the storm mentally brings the strength not only to deal but to overcome.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 June 2021

Pain is unbearable really

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Luz Hanaii 18 May 2019

Shedding the layers of past hurts is a very painful process, never the less is the only way to the healing freedom we all seek. Good luck in your spiritual growth and liberation. TFS

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Prabir Gayen 20 January 2019

I feel like a child trapped in a body, i am so tired all the time, Awesome line... beautiful feeling....A Buddha Mind

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 06 September 2018

it is so nice...............................

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