A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
I felt good, happy...
I no longer felt lonely.
I thought life would go on happily
In one long, long stretch of time...
But when the cold, harsh
winds of change started blowing,
The cloud of rain
had to drift away...
Life is still going on
In one long, long stretch of time...
I am not lonely.
I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
But you have left a void
That would take me
a long, long time to fill.
A wonderful poem.Life is never a straight line.It is full of ups and downs.Yes, time heals the voids and new hopes appear on the horizon.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
A note of bereavement is expresses at the ending lines, the positive hope is adorable which reflects in the opening lines. A heart felt expression.
Feelings gone with the wind I'm sure the void will be filled soon with your luvli poems...regards [ luvli is how Yorkshire people say it.]
Nice poem. Just reminds us once again, that Life is Like That! Offers no consolation…
Yes, life is still going on. A fabulous poem....5 stars
you have left an emptiness that would take time to feel. nice
Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can relate to this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing
A realistic view of life, .............at times we feel vacant, a sudden feeling of loneliness overtakes us............ Not necessarily palpable, but it eats away from within...................... A true n lovely write