Jasbir Chatterjee

Bronze Star - 2,778 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

A Cloud Of Rain - Poem by Jasbir Chatterjee

A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
I felt good, happy...
I no longer felt lonely.

I thought life would go on happily
In one long, long stretch of time...
But when the cold, harsh
winds of change started blowing,
The cloud of rain
had to drift away...

Life is still going on
In one long, long stretch of time...
I am not lonely.
I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
But you have left a void
That would take me
a long, long time to fill.


Comments about A Cloud Of Rain by Jasbir Chatterjee

  • Rookie - 200 Points Rajpal Singh (8/30/2015 2:43:00 AM)

    A note of bereavement is expresses at the ending lines, the positive hope is adorable which reflects in the opening lines. A heart felt expression. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,258 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/13/2014 1:14:00 AM)

    Time is the best healer, lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 8:22:00 AM)

    A realistic view of life, .............at times we feel vacant, a sudden feeling of loneliness overtakes us............
    Not necessarily palpable, but it eats away from within......................
    A true n lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nic Jennings (2/18/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    This poem took my breath away, expressing so appositely my current state. So glad to have found it as it has helped to clarify my thoughts, thank you Jasbir. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,205 Points Leslie Philibert (2/15/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Like this, but I think the imagery (wind, rain etc) is stereotyped.... so OK, but nothing much new. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Valsa George (10/21/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    In life, it is quite natural to experience a kind of vacancy at times! But such an void will soon be filled by something quite engaging! Be hopeful! A very realistic description of life! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (2/15/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Very profound sentiments about life became whne a loved one left! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rajnimila Rajnee (2/15/2013 3:33:00 AM)

    life alone is not loneliness and unhappiness, but the feeling of void- simply understood. touched withing the self. Great piece! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,512 Points Ken E Hall (1/7/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    Feelings gone with the wind I'm sure the void will be filled soon with your luvli poems...regards [ luvli is how Yorkshire people say it.] (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,460 Points Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 3:54:00 AM)

    really a poignant write. deserving, magnificent. excellent...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (5/2/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Simply said.......perfectly understood
    Words express emotions felt
    regards
    MaliniKadir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,063 Points Neela Nath Das (4/12/2012 7:25:00 AM)

    The pang of separation is deeply expressed through this poem.Great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aman Sa (3/31/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Fervent, the rhythm makes me listen (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (2/22/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    Thank you, Poemhunter, for choosing this poem as Poem of the day on 15 February 2012! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hnt Var (2/16/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    A beautiful outburst of your thoughts in this well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sylvia Lukeman (2/15/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    I have just discovered this fine poem.You write well and the reader can feel some of you heart feelings No person one can know exactly how another feels but I can certainly identify deeply with your words
    You would be welcome to visit my poetry, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (11/15/2011 2:11:00 AM)

    Rainbow


    Although the clouds travel low
    And let the rain knock on windows,
    Still, we know the sun’s love will glow
    To change grey tears into colorful rainbow.


    by Gordon Tseng (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/14/2010 12:06:00 AM)

    beautiful... when u lose something which u like, u feel the pain and the vacuum it creates gets filled very slowly..

    good work.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (2/14/2010 11:47:00 PM)

    a poignant write on the inner void caused by the transitory cloud of hope! deep and heartfelt! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (5/26/2009 9:07:00 PM)

    Jasbir,
    You're a poet...you write your innner feelings like a lost soul which only a poet can express. Hope floats...
    Cheers.
    Subroto (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 31, 2006


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