Xelam Kan

A Dream - Poem by Xelam Kan

Adieu! O my sweet fellow,
It's time to part our pillows
with kisses four
for melancholy sore.
lo the tyrant sun is up in the east
And calling for, to shun
the night feast.
The fragrance and charm of the night
stir my heart and keep
passions ignite.
Oh thy coral lips and blue bright eyes
taking my fancies to the seven skies,
and made my love immortal
as the Helen of Troy.

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, dream

Form: Ode

Comments about A Dream by Xelam Kan

  • (2/9/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    You totally reached the passion in your poem, expressing it superbly.
    Great feeling coming from it's depths. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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  • Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/4/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    What a lovely poem of passion and desire, not wanting that feeling to ever end.. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/9/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    What a write! Simply superb_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (11/4/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, very descriptive. (Report) Reply

  • Isabel Vicuna (11/3/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    Make me immortal in love and joy.....i love that phrase.....good work (Report) Reply

  • Nabila ima (11/2/2012 11:01:00 PM)

    I like your poem and I read it twice and try to understand your feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Ray Hart (11/1/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    I have a friend that calls me Mr. Romantic. You have got it all over me. I could never reach that standard.
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  • Asif Andalib (10/31/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem indeed. Great words and excellent flow. I like it (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    the title is often treated but you gave this title a really fresh touch, worth rereading (Report) Reply

  • Saeed Jan (10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM)

    Touching.. Could U be the Helen of my Troy! ! ! Really a hunting one.... Enchanting language bestowed with the charisma of engulfing hearts... The way U started and then swiftly moved towards your keynote is endearing.. Love it (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (10/27/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    REminds me of John Donne. A hint of Metaphysical poetry. Very touching. I liked the allusion on Helen. Wonderful Gulsher.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Maria Midence (10/25/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful. I love the rhymes. (Report) Reply

  • Fatma Ballaswud (10/25/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    Really nice romantic poem. It's wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/25/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    very nice poem so beautifully written by you. i liked it very much. and thank you for he share. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 25, 2015

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