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A dream

Adieu! Adieu! O my sweet fellow
It's time to part from pillow
The tyrant sun has captured the east
And calling to cease the night feast,
The fragrance and charm of the night
Stirring my heart and passion ignite
Could you be the Helen of my Troy?
Make me immortal in love and joy
Thy coral lips and blue bright eyes
Take my love in seven skies.

Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012
Edited: Thursday, February 28, 2013

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  • Unwritten Soul (12/9/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    What a write! Simply superb_Soul

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  • Valerie Dohren (11/4/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, very descriptive.

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  • Isabel Vicuna (11/3/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    Make me immortal in love and joy.....i love that phrase.....good work

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  • Nabila ima (11/2/2012 11:01:00 PM)

    I like your poem and I read it twice and try to understand your feeling.

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  • Ray Hart (11/1/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    I have a friend that calls me Mr. Romantic. You have got it all over me. I could never reach that standard.
    Ray.

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  • * Sunprincess * (11/1/2012 11:57:00 AM)

    wow..beautiful imagery..the sun is my favourite..love this poem..fabulous.. :)

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  • Asif Andalib (10/31/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem indeed. Great words and excellent flow. I like it

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/31/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    the title is often treated but you gave this title a really fresh touch, worth rereading

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  • Saeed Jan (10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM)

    Touching.. Could U be the Helen of my Troy! ! ! Really a hunting one.... Enchanting language bestowed with the charisma of engulfing hearts... The way U started and then swiftly moved towards your keynote is endearing.. Love it

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  • Jahan Zeb (10/27/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    REminds me of John Donne. A hint of Metaphysical poetry. Very touching. I liked the allusion on Helen. Wonderful Gulsher.10+++

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