xelam kan


A Dream - Poem by xelam kan

Adieu! O my sweet fellow,
It's time to part our pillows
with kisses four
for melancholy sore.
lo the tyrant sun is up in the east
And calling for, to shun
the night feast.
The fragrance and charm of the night
stir my heart and keep
passions ignite.
Oh thy coral lips and blue bright eyes
taking my fancies to the seven skies,
and made my love immortal
as the Helen of Troy.

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Form: Ode


Comments about A Dream by xelam kan

  • Gold Star - 30,567 Points Roseann Shawiak (2/9/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    You totally reached the passion in your poem, expressing it superbly.
    Great feeling coming from it's depths. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/4/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    What a lovely poem of passion and desire, not wanting that feeling to ever end.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (12/9/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    What a write! Simply superb_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (11/4/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, very descriptive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Isabel Vicuna (11/3/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    Make me immortal in love and joy.....i love that phrase.....good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nabila ima (11/2/2012 11:01:00 PM)

    I like your poem and I read it twice and try to understand your feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Ray Hart (11/1/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    I have a friend that calls me Mr. Romantic. You have got it all over me. I could never reach that standard.
    Ray. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,965 Points * Sunprincess * (11/1/2012 11:57:00 AM)

    wow..beautiful imagery..the sun is my favourite..love this poem..fabulous.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/31/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem indeed. Great words and excellent flow. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/31/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    the title is often treated but you gave this title a really fresh touch, worth rereading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM)

    Touching.. Could U be the Helen of my Troy! ! ! Really a hunting one.... Enchanting language bestowed with the charisma of engulfing hearts... The way U started and then swiftly moved towards your keynote is endearing.. Love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Jahan Zeb (10/27/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    REminds me of John Donne. A hint of Metaphysical poetry. Very touching. I liked the allusion on Helen. Wonderful Gulsher.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Midence (10/25/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful. I love the rhymes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fatma Ballaswud (10/25/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    Really nice romantic poem. It's wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/25/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    very nice poem so beautifully written by you. i liked it very much. and thank you for he share. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 25, 2015


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