Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 9,939 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

A Drop On A Lotus Leaf - Poem by Amitava Sur

A water bead on lotus leaf -
Shimmering with a glow
But up to that time only
As long is on the leaf.

With a little jerk or a shake
It rolls down and ends.

This life is like that only
As a drop on a lotus leaf
Priceless is our human life
But very mortal and short lived.

With a little quiver or a tweak
It shatters and then breaks.
Very short lived and uncertain
Like the dew on the grass tips.

To extract the beauty of life
So long you are alive -

Love all with love and peace -
Love flower bird and child.
Spread out the treasure of love
To the saints, demons and the beasts.

Enjoy the life without harming others
Live and let live with peace,
Who knows when the heart will stop
Even when you're at your height of success!

Life is like water drops
Wobbling on lotus leaf.
Short lived and uncertain
Like the dew on the grass tips.
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Amitava (21.02.2014) 6-30 am



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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Hello - respected poets - this is my 100th poem after joining this PH club in Sept 2013. I could write those poems on your inspiration only. I hope your encouragements will be there with me.

Well, this one I have written about our priceless life which is very mortal but very unique. Please read and give your valuable comments with rating

Comments about A Drop On A Lotus Leaf by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 20,714 Points Fabrizio Frosini (6/16/2015 4:09:00 AM)

    your well penned poem is a bright portrayal of the uncertainty, fragility and also brevity of life, along with a universal message: don't waste your life, but live all your days fully and in peace with yourself and the others.. We should remember such a message each and every moment.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 310 Points Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (6/12/2015 2:10:00 PM)

    Good poem about the ephemeralty of human existence. We written and analogically apt. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,061 Points Uma Ram (6/8/2015 11:28:00 PM)

    Enjoy life without harming others...beautiful truth sir. thanks for sharing sir (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,230 Points Akachukwu Lekwauwa (6/1/2015 9:45:00 AM)

    another superb simile on life. Good job! I enjoyed reading through (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 993 Points Mallika Achuthan Menon (5/20/2015 11:08:00 PM)

    Dear poet,

    A drop on a lotus leaf I have read..You have told a great philosophical
    truth in a very simple manner. Great write...Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,568 Points Stephen Katona (4/26/2015 7:29:00 PM)

    A wonderful 100th poem. I really felt the fragility and beauty of life as I was reading this. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,461 Points Nhien Nguyen (4/26/2015 12:14:00 PM)

    It's beautiful. Thank you. NHIEN NGUYEN (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,055 Points Hazel Durham (4/20/2015 7:05:00 AM)

    Stunning write, life is fragile and beautiful you have created a poem of unique beauty! Congratulations on your 100th poem and best wishes! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,281 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/5/2015 8:41:00 PM)

    It reads even better the second time around. bursting with a beauty that is rich, robust and refreshing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,766 Points Roseann Shawiak (2/14/2015 3:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! Had ti read it once again!!!! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,092 Points Shabeeh Haider (10/28/2014 7:50:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem which is so true to life. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,710 Points Walterrean Salley (10/28/2014 3:29:00 AM)

    Excellent portrayal of the brevity of life. Be grateful for today... Tomorrow is not promised. Thanks Amitave. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,864 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (8/27/2014 4:17:00 AM)

    How very true...one tweak... and it's all gone...the dew drops...like everything else in life... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,568 Points Stephen Katona (8/24/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem. It really makes me feel lucky to be alive. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,431 Points Ramesh Rai (8/2/2014 5:47:00 AM)

    If every one could understand the true fact of life then there would be no evil. A beautiful message with your florescent ink. Regards ever. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 131 Points Kirti Sharma (6/28/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    a very beautiful title... a lovely poem with a true message...
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/24/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    Congratulations for the century with a mighty six. Amitava in this poem you are wonderful and amazing. The universal message of love and peace is the demand of time. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,937 Points Savita Tyagi (6/23/2014 1:10:00 PM)

    The most important message about life presented so beautifully. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2014 4:31:00 AM)

    As desired by you I have rated it 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2014 4:29:00 AM)

    Life is like water drops
    Wobbling on lotus leaf.
    Short lived and uncertain
    Like the dew on the grass tips.
    A nice write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 20, 2015


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