In A Misty Autumn Night. Poem by Amitava Sur

In A Misty Autumn Night.

Rating: 4.8


Cherishing your presence
Being so benevolent,
Your every footstep
Is immensely engraved
In the inner core of mine.

Assuming your footprint
Under the full moon sky
Walking gracefully -
In a misty autumn night.

Eagerly I await your footsteps
In my deserted barren life.
Quietly you step in
In this silent dead night.

O' moon you glow a bit more
My love, she comes......
Oh' my dear the inseparable......
Being always so closest to my heart.
I welcome you in this cool autumn night
Beamed with this moon's loving light.

Sit here, by the side of me
Giving your lovely smile,
Don't leave me so helplessly
Don't punish me anymore.
I just cannot think a moment
Without seeing you here! !

O' my dear -
I loved you, love you
And will be loving throughout my life.
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Amitava (8.7.2014)



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY AMITAVA SUR

Wednesday, July 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 10 July 2014

A very romantic and passionate write. Love and the moonlight seems to go hand in hand. I Ioved it.

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Lorraine Colon 10 July 2014

Love, indeed, leaves footprints on the heart, and always remains with us..... past, present and future. Beautiful, heartfelt poetry.

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Valsa George 11 July 2014

Overflowing with passionate emotions....! The moonlit night is very solicitous for such a heart to heart communion! A poem with such lovely imagery.... Enjoyed!

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Roseann Shawiak 13 July 2014

The moon's loving light illuminates her footprints and etches them forever within you. An inseparable love stays within your heart. Very heartfelt poem, Amitava. Passionately romantic - just the way you are! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Akhtar Jawad 15 July 2014

O' moon you glow a bit more My love, she comes...... Oh' my love the inseparable...... Always closest to my heart. Welcome you in this cool autumn night Beamed with this moon's loving light. I loved you, love you And will be loving throughout my life. A nice write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

Overflowing with romance, and passion of love, and a goodly read.

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Savita Tyagi 13 December 2014

Great love poem. So beautiful! Flooded with love and beauty of an romantic autumn night. Enjoyed reading it again! And so glad to be able to leave comment this time.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 August 2014

very well composed is this deeply romantic poem.

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Salini Nair 23 July 2014

beautiful lines on love and expectation, nice sir.... thanks for your valuable comments on my poems

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Loaded with a love that is lovely!

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