Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 6,710 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

In A Misty Autumn Night.


Cherishing your presence
Being so benevolent,
Your every footstep
Is immensely engraved
In the inner core of mine.

Assuming your footprint
Under the full moon sky
Walking gracefully -
In a misty autumn night.

Eagerly I await your footsteps
In my deserted barren life.
Quietly you step in
In this silent dead night.

O' moon you glow a bit more
My love, she comes......
Oh' my dear the inseparable......
Being always so closest to my heart.
I welcome you in this cool autumn night
Beamed with this moon's loving light.

Sit here, by the side of me
Giving your lovely smile,
Don't leave me so helplessly
Don't punish me anymore.
I just cannot think a moment
Without seeing you here! !

O' my dear -
I loved you, love you
And will be loving throughout my life.
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Amitava (8.7.2014)



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY AMITAVA SUR

Submitted: Wednesday, July 09, 2014
Edited: Monday, December 22, 2014

Topic of this poem: Love


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  • Gold Star - 4,859 Points Savita Tyagi (12/13/2014 11:33:00 AM)

    Great love poem. So beautiful! Flooded with love and beauty of an romantic autumn night. Enjoyed reading it again! And so glad to be able to leave comment this time. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/9/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    very well composed is this deeply romantic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (7/23/2014 3:17:00 AM)

    beautiful lines on love and expectation, nice sir....
    thanks for your valuable comments on my poems (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,479 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/23/2014 1:36:00 AM)

    Loaded with a love that is lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,077 Points Electric Lady (7/22/2014 7:58:00 AM)

    This is fantastic. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,329 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/21/2014 12:19:00 PM)

    So nice of you to take love and moon along on the path you are sitting since the time eternal...........very nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,543 Points * Sunprincess * (7/20/2014 7:15:00 AM)

    ..............enjoyed this wonderful tribute....and I absolutely love the title....autumn nights are my favourite....and the imagery of the full moon is beautiful..... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/19/2014 11:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem filled with romance flowing in air. We can hear the echo...Love leaves the footprints which will keep on echoing one's heart....Very true said, your love lives deep in your heart. Loved reading it.

    Thank you Sir, for the lovely comments for my poem, Thankful to you for not banging.....Smiles.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,479 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/18/2014 5:00:00 PM)

    Loaded with a love that moves the leaps over the moon with a romantic jump. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,312 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    Deep emotions run galore!
    This poem contains your deep emotions. Poets all over the world admire moonlit autumn nights for their ambiance of love. Your passionate appeal to your love is well conveyed and well understood. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,932 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/15/2014 12:29:00 PM)

    O' moon you glow a bit more
    My love, she comes......
    Oh' my love the inseparable......
    Always closest to my heart.
    Welcome you in this cool autumn night
    Beamed with this moon's loving light.
    I loved you, love you
    And will be loving throughout my life.
    A nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,914 Points Roseann Shawiak (7/13/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    The moon's loving light illuminates her footprints and etches them forever within you. An inseparable love stays within your heart. Very heartfelt poem, Amitava. Passionately romantic - just the way you are! Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (7/11/2014 12:04:00 AM)

    Overflowing with passionate emotions....! The moonlit night is very solicitous for such a heart to heart communion! A poem with such lovely imagery.... Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,762 Points Lorraine Colon (7/10/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    Love, indeed, leaves footprints on the heart, and always remains with us..... past, present and future. Beautiful, heartfelt poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (7/10/2014 10:37:00 AM)

    A very romantic and passionate write. Love and the
    moonlight seems to go hand in hand. I Ioved it. (Report) Reply

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