Treasure Island

Amitava Sur

(20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

In A Misty Autumn Night.


Cherishing your presence
Being so benevolent,
Your every footstep
Is immensely engraved
In the inner core of mine.

Assuming your footprint
Under the full moon sky
Walking gracefully -
In a misty autumn night.

Eagerly I await your footsteps
In my deserted barren life.
Quietly you step in
In this silent dead night.

O' moon you glow a bit more
My love, she comes......
Oh' my love the inseparable......
Always closest to my heart.
Welcome you in this cool autumn night
Beamed with this moon's loving light.
I loved you, love you
And will be loving throughout my life.
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Amitava (8.7.2014)



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Submitted: Wednesday, July 09, 2014
Edited: Saturday, July 19, 2014

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  • Salini Nair (7/23/2014 3:17:00 AM)

    beautiful lines on love and expectation, nice sir....
    thanks for your valuable comments on my poems (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (7/20/2014 7:15:00 AM)

    ..............enjoyed this wonderful tribute....and I absolutely love the title....autumn nights are my favourite....and the imagery of the full moon is beautiful..... (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/19/2014 11:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem filled with romance flowing in air. We can hear the echo...Love leaves the footprints which will keep on echoing one's heart....Very true said, your love lives deep in your heart. Loved reading it.

    Thank you Sir, for the lovely comments for my poem, Thankful to you for not banging.....Smiles.. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    Deep emotions run galore!
    This poem contains your deep emotions. Poets all over the world admire moonlit autumn nights for their ambiance of love. Your passionate appeal to your love is well conveyed and well understood. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (7/15/2014 12:29:00 PM)

    O' moon you glow a bit more
    My love, she comes......
    Oh' my love the inseparable......
    Always closest to my heart.
    Welcome you in this cool autumn night
    Beamed with this moon's loving light.
    I loved you, love you
    And will be loving throughout my life.
    A nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (7/13/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    The moon's loving light illuminates her footprints and etches them forever within you. An inseparable love stays within your heart. Very heartfelt poem, Amitava. Passionately romantic - just the way you are! Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/11/2014 12:04:00 AM)

    Overflowing with passionate emotions....! The moonlit night is very solicitous for such a heart to heart communion! A poem with such lovely imagery.... Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (7/10/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    Love, indeed, leaves footprints on the heart, and always remains with us..... past, present and future. Beautiful, heartfelt poetry. (Report) Reply

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