A Facial Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Facial

Rating: 5.0


how many of it can i remember
a dark blue in color
not a spec of white any where

a light blue apron wear
with a frill of white clouds everywhere
the radiant yellow adds another color

a brush or canvas i have not here
am not a painter to put this in picture
am not a poet for my words to color

how would i ever remember
a sky so many in number
tomorrow i do not know what is in store....
.......for me up there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 02 July 2009

beautiful lines and enchanting

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

good piece...imaginative composition...thanks...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 July 2009

beautiful words indeed.. good expressions! ! thanks for this one! ! 10 with love shan

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premji premji 02 July 2009

a beautiful poem painted on the canvas of life...............

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Sandhya S N 03 July 2009

very touching words 10+++ regards Sandhya

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Mubeen Sadhika 25 September 2009

Nature played in your words. Awesome writing. Great narration. Deserves 10++++

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Mamta Agarwal 12 July 2009

amazing transforming patterns of the clouds and sky- fascinating write. some things can only be witnessed not captured and locked in words or paint just a moment in time. very creative poem 10 Mamta

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Marieta Maglas 11 July 2009

''a brush or canvas i have not here am not a painter to put this in picture am not a poet for my words to color'' nice poem...well written...10+++

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 July 2009

behind the sky..their lies our home... very nice piece Sam...very impressive.. very heartwarming thoughts very inspiring...divine and touching flowing with humility... 10+++ lovelots maia

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Bob Blackwell 07 July 2009

Each day our sun rises on a different world.

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