Rajendran Muthiah

Silver Star - 4,359 Points (16.03.1950)

A Great Fall In A Dream - Poem by Rajendran Muthiah

She swept me up to the dreamy sky.
Riffs of her music filled my heart.
In her close embrace, I swooned.
Hugged me and kissed me.
I was born again.
Her eyes glinted.
I fell down.
Wounded.
Peach!


Comments about A Great Fall In A Dream by Rajendran Muthiah

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (6/12/2016 5:21:00 AM)

    In her close embrace! With the muse of love and life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (9/20/2015 11:28:00 AM)

    Love is what makes us rich internally and spiritually but we turn into a pauper the moment this element of love goes amiss in our lives, for whatever reason. This small poem, though, begins on a high but ends on a poignant note. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (5/28/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    Yes, Rajendran, love is totally beautiful until it dies and leaves one wounded. Short poignant poem.
    It touches the compassion within me. Thank you for sharing this poem.
    Thank you also for your comment on my poem: Inner Prison. It is very much appreciated. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Guenael Oristel Guenael Oristel (12/3/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    wow.... no words to describe this poem........ (Report) Reply

  • Aana Samsohang (3/24/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    its..sweet I likesss =) (Report) Reply

  • Pankajam K (3/21/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    short and sweet. Liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012



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