rajendran muthiah

Rookie - 280 Points (16.03.1950)

A Great Fall in a Dream


She swept me up to the dreamy sky.
Riffs of her music filled my heart.
In her close embrace, I swooned.
Hugged me and kissed me.
I was born again.
Her eyes glinted.
I fell down.
Wounded.
Peach!

Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 15,287 Points Roseann Shawiak (5/28/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    Yes, Rajendran, love is totally beautiful until it dies and leaves one wounded. Short poignant poem.
    It touches the compassion within me. Thank you for sharing this poem.
    Thank you also for your comment on my poem: Inner Prison. It is very much appreciated. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Guenael Oristel (12/3/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    wow.... no words to describe this poem........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aana Samsohang (3/24/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    its..sweet I likesss =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Pankajam K (3/21/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    short and sweet. Liked it. (Report) Reply

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